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Wings by Tervola Wings by Tervola
My own emo poem I wrote in 2010. Please, correct me if you notice some terrible grammar mistakes. Thank you.
Sorry for emoness.

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paper/pencil + photoshop
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miya-cchi Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nigdy nie sądziłam, że poezja i to jeszcze po angielsku, tak mi się spodoba ;_; Piękne. Pisz więcej <3
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Tervola Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Oh jej, dziękuję :heart: Niestety smutna prawda jest taka, że piszę tylko jak mam super doła D;
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miya-cchi Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
D:
To lepiej żeby tych wierszy było jak najmniej, chociaż przyznam, że masz talent dziewczyno i chętnie poczytałabym więcej ;__;
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Tervola Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Przyznam, że mam więcej, ale za dużo emo to niezdrowo. Co sobie ludzie pomyślą D; Dziękuję :heart:
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miya-cchi Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Co się ludźmi przejmujesz ;3; zawsze możesz wrzucać raz na jakiś czas
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Grawuar Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
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Tervola Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Oh jej, jaka piękna piosenka i jak pasuje :aww: Dzięki :heart:
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Grawuar Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Ach, Mon!...
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Dragonlegends Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Student Filmographer
Thats amazing!
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Tervola Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thank you :)
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Salvada Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Piękne!
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Tervola Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Dziękuję :aww:
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Salvada Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Proszę :3
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Altarior Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012   Digital Artist
Beautiful, love the poem and the illustration :3
And about grammar mistakes, the only one I see is that it should be "everyone does" instead of "everyone do", but I've seen exceptions before. I've noticed a lot of songs have wrong grammar just to make something rhyme, so I think it's alright :P
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Tervola Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Oh I see, I thought I could cont it as the plural. I also noticed songs have such grammar mistakes. Well, if I change this it won't rhyme D:
Thank you for notice.
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MemoriesOfSorrow Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012
Wonderful, really wonderful. I just love poems like this. It seems like hope,sorrow and pain all exist always, even in a world with wings. Its really great, well done :) :clap:
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Tervola Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Yes, they're always a part of live. Glad you like it even if it's a bit sad. Thank you :aww:
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